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RUNNING SHORT STORY [ MONDAY COUPLE JJANG ! ]


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#1 acai

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Posted 20 September 2011 - 09:58 PM

Hi all,

I don't know how to start, but, I really like writing. And a few days ago I found a news, Jihyo-Noona in the hospital, I was so worried about his condition, and suddenly remembered if Gary-Oppa is going to visit him.

As i imagined it, I even became a story about them^^

Maybe is not a good story and not qualified, but I just wanted to share with all of you. Hopefully you guys can like it.

so .. I'll start it.
The background story at the hospital where Ms. Mong in hospitalization^^.







~ PROLOGUE ~


In the midst of busy, Gary-Oppa was taking his time to go to see Jihyo-Noona in the hospital at night. When he arrived there, it was around 10:50 PM and Jihyo-Noona were asleep.

Gary-Oppa went into Jihyo-Noona's room and sat next to her bed, while he was looking at her ( not with his typical expression "Peacefull Gary", but that time his expression was definitely not just a calm face, but also shined with his sadness as he looked at the face of Jihyo-Noona who was resting on the bed.

Gary-Oppa whether consciously or not, reached out to caress Jihyo-Noona hair, and therefore Jihyo-Noona awakened.

Jihyo: Oh .. Oppa ? ( Jihyo-Noona was little surprised and sounded weak, even though it's a little better, but her condition was still weak )
Gary: Ah .. Sorry to wake you up ..
Jihyo: Oh -_- ( BLANK.. Just woke up from her sleep so Ms. Mong was totally BLANK lolsss )

Then Gary-Oppa get mineral water for Jihyo-Noona. Jihyo-Noona was accepted and drank a little.

Gary: How is your condition ? already feel better ?
Jihyo: Tud .. Tud .. ( Just nodded her head only )
Gary: That's good ..
Jihyo: Oppa .. Still comes here this late. Is there no filming tomorrow ?
Gary: No. .. No. .. Have you forgotten ? Because you're in the hospital so filming Running Man was canceled. ( Gary replied innocently )
Jihyo: Tud .. Tud .. ( She nodded her head while feeling guilty for the cancellation of the filming )
Gary: No.. No.. It is not your fault ... yahhhhhh .. What the heck I'm saying .. ( Confused himself )
Jihyo: ...... ( BLANK a moment )

then suddenly,

Jihyo: Tehehehe ...

Jihyo-Noona laugh at his innocence, and Gary-Oppa had come to smile while watching at his Monday Couple can still laughing.

Jihyo: Oh .. Oppa.. it's so late .. Don't Oppa go home for taking a break ? today you have work very hard, right ?
Gary: Ah ... I'm a strong man. No need to take break.
Jihyo: But oppa ..
Gary: Jihyo ah ... Let's see what time is it ?

Gary-Oppa luring out his hand to Jihyo-Noona to get a look at his watch. Apparently it was past midnight, around 00:14 AM.

Jihyo: Oh .. Oppa .. It is past midnight.
While shaking his head Gary-Oppa replied "I've asked permission to the hospital to be able to stay here to accompany you until tomorrow morning as your family"

Jihyo: Oppa .. But why?
Gary: ( Tsk.. ) You forget what day is today ? Is MONDAY, Jihyo ah .. So take care of you is my duty you know ?

*BLANK* Jihyo-Noona was tounge-tied.

Jihyo: But ..
Gary-Oppa immediately start knocking on Jihyo-Noona head like in RM Epi.55 when he break Sukjin-Jihyo's bracelet, while saying ," You feel good without me ? Huh .. Huh .. Huh .." and continuing knocking on Jihyo-Noona head again ( of course Gray-oppa was knocking on Jihyo-Noona head gently^^ )

Jihyo-Noona held back tears and called Gary-Oppa, " Oppa ..".

Gary: Ah .. Silly Jihyo. Do not cry, get well soon and we can go on a date again like usual .. tehehe .. * Blushing *
Jihyo: Tud .. Tud .. ( And nodded her head again )
Gary: Nah .. Now you lie down and sleep, I will be here watching you like in the drama. ^^

Both of them smiled and laughed as usual, and they began to share their stories about what they've done on these 2 days. And when she began to feel sleepy, Jihyo-Noona said to Gary-Oppa.

Jihyo: Oppa ah ..
Gary: What .. What ..?
Jihyo: Can I hold your hand while I'm sleeping ?
Gary: * Blushing * Ah .. Of course you can .. I will not go anywhere.
Jihyo: Gamsahamida oppa ..
Gary: Jihyo, sleep well, if you do need something, just hit my head as you usually does, ok ?

Jihyo-Noona smiled and tried to close her eyes and fell a sleep. Gary-Oppa was watching her Monday Couple fell asleep with the warmest expressioin, that We had never seen before.
This time Gary-Oppa is not an un-emotional Gary anymore. He is Jihyo-Noona's Strong Man with Soft Hearted Monday Couple, Kang Gary.


NB: Hopefully Jihyo-Noona can recover quickly.


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Edited by acai, 10 October 2011 - 07:18 PM.

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Posted 20 September 2011 - 10:01 PM

*moved it to talent show for now - a way to express your creative abilities*

"Non Omnia Possumus Omnes"



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#3 acai

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Posted 20 September 2011 - 10:25 PM

How to move it ?
sorry im newbie >.<

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#4 sellion89

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Posted 21 September 2011 - 02:23 AM

good job... if i hav time i would like to make a story as well.

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#5 HahaItsEli_

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Posted 21 September 2011 - 02:26 AM

This is really good. I like it. You used really good details that I could practically picture it actually happening. Good Job!

#6 MinChan

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Posted 21 September 2011 - 06:15 AM

LOL.. like that.. the story is simple :p
it will be funny if it really happen

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#7 barzul

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Posted 21 September 2011 - 08:36 AM

good job acai... monday couple jjang!

-your hyung from jakarta...hehehe

#8 acai

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Posted 21 September 2011 - 10:30 PM

I am very grateful you guys can like my story.
Thank you very much.

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#9 JerryChino

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Posted 25 September 2011 - 02:22 PM

This is more then a script then a story! When are you gonna give it to the PD?? A+ from me! Money Couple fan here x3

#10 acai

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Posted 25 September 2011 - 08:11 PM

Hi Jerry, thz.. do u know how to contact the RM PD ? i want give it to them but dont know how.. lolssss
and i'm indeed monday couple fans, but i dont know money couple XD

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